Adult Applebloom

well, this is my first time doing a pic related critic, so I can be wrong and have some errors that can be effected to the critic. With that out of the way:

Vision: What you do here was to give a first person effect of what your character saw to herself. Namely, Applebloom suddenly was a mare. Both of her friend seems awfully chipper by this and that is a plus. However, even if this was good work, its clearly seems you use Flash. (even if most of the art from MLP FIM is coming from it) This will effect originality and technique. But nothing major. A 3.5 star for vision

Originality: We don't see a lot of adult CMC in the art, which is getting a major buff in the originality. That and only one of the three are a mare. And those face expression by our fellow CMC, not often we see those. Even with Flash, you get most of the face expression and the originality in high quality. which make one of the most important facture about an art. You got 5 stars

Technique: Most art from MLP FIM is from Flash, and you clearly show us that you used it. Even with the mirror reflects and the face expression it can not be ignored that you used an easy art and animation program. 3 stars is the best here be course of computer work does not gain the technique of hand drawing. Call me old on this one mate, I earned it.

Impact: What we see here is funny, though worthy and art that can impact our thinking. What this pic is telling me, is that you have to embrace your childhood for what it's worth. For suddenly you are an adult and you can not go back. One said: Take care of your childhood, because it is the only innocent thing you have in life.
4.5 in impact will serve you well mate.